Rephrase / CORRECTION
The reverse
brain drain/ Language
Rephrase :
1)
India’
s not only the world's largest democracy but a country with untapped and
unlimited economic potential
⇰Not
only isn't India the world's largest economy, it is also a country with untapped and unlimited economic potential.
2)
many
were forced to return to India
⇰Many had to/ were obliged to/ were compelled to return to India.
3)
India's economy boomed while the US and other
countries have suffered…]
⇰ Contrary to/ Unlike India , the US and other countries have
suffered.
4)
Due to the mass exodus of Indians…
⇰ Because of the mass exodus of Indians…
5)
laws that forbid them from working on
"outside jobs".
⇰laws that ban them from working on "outside jobs".
6)
they are not allowed to be self-employed in a
business venture.
⇰ they are forbidden to be self-employed in a business venture.
7)
[It] will make it more difficult to obtain
jobs.
⇰ It
will make it harder/ less easy to obtain jobs.
8)
they are unable to get their spouses, parents,
and relatives visas abroad.
⇰they can't get their spouses, parents, and relatives visas abroad.
9)
a
special mention needs to be made to scientists,
⇰ We need to make a special mention...
10) After all, home is home, right?
⇰After
all, home is home,isn't it?
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