Rephrase / CORRECTION

The reverse brain drain/ Language

Rephrase :



1)    India’ s not only the world's largest democracy but a country with untapped and unlimited economic potential

⇰Not only isn't India the world's largest economy, it is also a country with untapped and unlimited economic potential.



2)    many were forced to return to India

⇰Many had to/ were obliged to/ were compelled to return to India.



3)     India's economy boomed while the US and other countries have suffered…]

Contrary to/ Unlike  India , the US and other countries have suffered.



4)     Due to the mass exodus of Indians…

⇰ Because of the mass exodus of Indians…



5)     laws that forbid them from working on "outside jobs".

⇰laws that ban them from working  on "outside jobs".



6)     they are not allowed to be self-employed in a business venture.

they are forbidden to be self-employed in a business venture.



7)     [It] will make it more difficult to obtain jobs.

⇰ It will make it harder/ less easy to obtain jobs.



8)     they are unable to get their spouses, parents, and relatives visas abroad.

⇰they can't get  their spouses, parents, and relatives visas abroad.



9)    a special mention needs to be made to scientists,

We need to make a special mention...



10) After all, home is home, right?

⇰After all, home is home,isn't it?

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